my writing has improved alot because my thesis statement is clear and shows appropriate statements and gives me a lead with my good information and ideas. with my good ideas i have good contents. but i could improve my writing with better structure and better writing techniques. i do alot of repetition and if i can reduce that i can enhance my ideas and content. i could also do a little bit more of reaserch and gain more background information about the subject.
Organization.
my writing shows organization because it has structured paragraphs aswell as good and organized information i my writing. my writing also shows organization because in my paragraph the detail and information i put is organize.
